* 565 Fled and pursu'd tranverse the resonant fugue. 570 Into fit moulds prepar'd; from which he form'd 565. two massy clods of ir'on and brass Had melted, (whether found where casual fire Had wasted woods on mountain or in vale, Down to the veins of earth,-] From Lucretius, v. 1240. Quod superest, as atque aurum, ferrumque repertum est, Et simul argenti pondus, plumbique potestas; Ignis ubi ingentes silvas ardore cremârat Montibus in magnis. But these verses want emendation. Plumbi potestas is nonsense. The stop should be placed thus: After these, 573. After these,] As being the descendants of the younger brother, but on the hither side, Cain having been banished into a more distant country, a different sort, the posterity of Seth wholly dif ferent from that of Cain, from the high neighbouring hills, which was their seat, having their habitation in the mountains near Paradise, down to the plain descended, where the Cainites dwelt; by their guise just men they seemed, and all their study bent to worship God aright, the Scripture itself speaks of them as the worshippers of the true God, and know his works not hid, Et simul argenti pondus, plumbi and Josephus and other writers que, potestas Ignis ubi ingentes &c. Argenti pondus plumbique, as in Virgil, argenti pondus et auri. Potestas ignis expresses the consuming power of fire. We have potentia solis in Virgil, and potestates herbarum. Jortin. 573. Fusil or grav'n] By melting or carving. Hume, inform us that they were addicted to the study of natural philosophy, and especially of astronomy, (Joseph. Antiq. lib. i. c. 2.) nor those things last (in the first edition it is lost, but afterwards corrected among the errata) which might preserve, nor was it their last care and study to know those things which might preserve freedom and peace But on the hither side, a different sort 576 From the high neighb'ring hills, which was their seat, In gems and wanton dress; to th' harp they sung 580 The men though grave, ey'd them, and let their eyes 585 Fast caught, they lik'd, and each his liking chose ; to men. Though this account 582. A bevy of fair women,] A bevy is a company, of the Italian beva, (says Hume,) a covey of partridges. It is a word used by Chaucer, and by Spenser likewise of a company of women, Faery Queen, b. ii. A lovely bevy of fair ladies sat. 590 A bevy of fair damsels close did lie. And b. v. cant. ix. st. 31. A bevy of fair virgins clad in white. And by Shakespeare, Henry -none here he hopes, One care abroad. 586. -till in the amorous net Fast caught, they lik'd,] Dr. Bentley finding first in the later editions, says that Milton must have given it fast: and so he did in both the editions published in his life time. Pearce. 588. till th' evening star, Hymen, then first to marriage rites invok'd: Of love and youth not lost, songs, garlands, flowers, To whom thus Michael. Judge not what is best By pleasure, though to nature seeming meet, Created, as thou art, to nobler end Holy and pure, conformity divine. Those tents thou saw'st so pleasant, were the tents 614. For that fair female troop thou saw'st,] The construction is not, as some may apprehend, For that fair female troop (which) thou sawest; but thou sawest that 595 600 605 610 615 fair female troop, that seemed &c. which is a sufficient proof of the posterity of Cain begetting a beauteous offspring. Bred only and completed to the taste Of lustful appetence, to sing, to dance, To dress, and troll the tongue, and roll the eye. Ere long to swim at large; and laugh, for which To whom thus Adam of short joy bereft. 621. To these that sober race of men, &c.] As we read in Gen. vi. 2. The sons of God saw the daughters of men, that they were fair; and they took them wives of all which they chose. It. is now generally agreed, that this passage is to be understood of the sons of Seth, the worshippers of the true God, making matches with the idolatrous daughters of wicked Cain; and Milton very rightly puts this construction upon it here, though elsewhere he seems to give into the old exploded conceit of the angels becoming enamoured of the daughters of men. See iii. 463. and the note there, and likewise v. 447. and Par. Reg. ii. 178, &c. 627. The world ere long a world of tears must weep.] Dr. Bentley observes that this world and world is a jingle, and that a world of tears is a low expression. He would therefore 620 625 speaks in ver. 757. But if this verse be blameable on this account, yet our poet has used the same way of speaking in ix. 11. That brought into this world a world of woe. I think that the foregoing part of this sentence should be pointed thus, and now swim in joy, Ere long to swim at large; and laugh, for which The world ere long a world of tears must weep. For swimming in joy and swimming at large are opposed to each other, as are likewise laughing and weeping a world of tears. Pearce. As the sense is so much improved by this pointing, we cannot but prefer it to Milton's own, which was thus: -and now swim in joy (Ere long to swim at large) and laugh; for which The world ere long a world of tears Enter'd so fair, should turn aside to tread 630 Holds on the same, from Woman to begin. He look'd, and saw wide territory spread 635 640 Part wield their arms, part curb the foaming steed, Both horse and foot, nor idly must'ring stood; 645 650 638. He look'd and saw wide territory spread &c.] The next vision is of a quite contrary nature, and filled with the horrors of war. Adam at the sight of it melts into tears, and breaks out in that passionate speech, -O what are these, Death's ministers, not men &c. Addison. 642. —emprise ;] An old word for enterprise. It is used in the Mask. Alas! good vent'rous youth, I love thy courage yet, and bold emprise. 645. -nor idly must'ring stood;] One cannot perceive the pertinence of this without supposing that it hinted at the circumstances of the land-army at that time. Warburton. |